这首诗怎么样？议，春，秋rn，戈矛在手剑在怀，古道争关易军台；rn，江山效影朝夕替，桃园颓尽无人白。1，首先，作为绝句，诗句的节...
这首诗怎么样？
议 春 秋rn 戈矛在手剑在怀，古道争关易军台；rn 江山效影朝夕替，桃园颓尽无人白。1，首先，作为绝句，诗句的节拍要平仄相间，即构成所谓的律句，这首诗好几句都不是律句。
2，简单来讲，绝句的一联之内二四六分明，即上下句二四六位置的字要平仄相对，违反了，就叫失对。
3，作为绝句，两联的起句要平仄相反，也就是第三句的节拍点{二四六字}要和第二句相同，这个叫做粘，违反了就叫做失粘。从宏观上看，第三句与第二句相粘的目的，是为了使两联的起句（也就是第一句和第三句）平仄相反，如果每一联平仄相同，就会出现韵律雷同。
4，从平水韵看，倒是没有三平尾，而是韵脚平仄相混，因为夕、白两个字是入声字
2，简单来讲，绝句的一联之内二四六分明，即上下句二四六位置的字要平仄相对，违反了，就叫失对。
3，作为绝句，两联的起句要平仄相反，也就是第三句的节拍点{二四六字}要和第二句相同，这个叫做粘，违反了就叫做失粘。从宏观上看，第三句与第二句相粘的目的，是为了使两联的起句（也就是第一句和第三句）平仄相反，如果每一联平仄相同，就会出现韵律雷同。
4，从平水韵看，倒是没有三平尾，而是韵脚平仄相混，因为夕、白两个字是入声字
内容方面还是不错的，各种意象恰到好处，塑造除了一些意境，达到了该有的效果；作为绝句，格律上犯了些忌，失对、失粘、三平调等、使整体有所降色。
戈矛执手剑在怀，古道争关易军台；
江山效影朝夕替，桃园颓尽无人白。
江山效影朝夕替，桃园颓尽无人白。
桃园颓尽无人再。。。
写的不错，议春秋的话，怎么会有桃园呢，所以还需要修改。
很押韵的诗
求vb大佬康康这个题
Private Sub Form_Load()
Dim sum, s(50), i, j, m, k As Integer
Dim outStr As String
For i = 2 To 1000
k = 1
sum = 0
Erase s
outStr = ""
For j = 1 To Int(i / 2)
If i Mod j = 0 Then
sum = sum + j
s(k) = j
k = k + 1
End If
Next j
If sum = i Then
For m = 2 To 50
If s(m) <> "" Then
outStr = outStr & " + " & s(m)
End If
Next m
outStr = i & " = 1" & outStr
Print outStr
End If
Next i
End Sub
英语大佬来康康这篇玩意有什么可以改的么，拿百度翻译整的
Dear SamrnI am happy receive your email ,glad you could come to China , I like the photos you sent to me,They were great , I hope you can come to my house,I know you like Chinese food very much,I can also teach you how to cook some Chinese food if you have the interest,Finally, I wish you a wonderful holiday,I look forward to hearing form you soonrnbest regardsrnLi MinDear Sam,
I am glad to hear from you .The photos you sent to me were great.When You come to China,You can come to my house.I know You are interested in Chinese food, I will try my best to teach You how to cook decilious and traditional food.Finally, I hope You have a wonderful holiday.
I look forward to hearing form you!
Best wish!
Li Min
I am glad to hear from you .The photos you sent to me were great.When You come to China,You can come to my house.I know You are interested in Chinese food, I will try my best to teach You how to cook decilious and traditional food.Finally, I hope You have a wonderful holiday.
I look forward to hearing form you!
Best wish!
Li Min
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