在经历过考研后,今天想跟大家分享一下我在备考时买的大作文模板,希望22考研的小伙伴们有所帮助。要写好英语作文,首先第一件事是练字...
在经历过考研后,今天想跟大家分享一下我在备考时买的大作文模板,希望22考研的小伙伴们有所帮助。
要写好英语作文,首先第一件事是练字,纠正自己在书写方面的问题,单词写的漂亮,会让改卷老师在看到你的作文第一眼时就眼前一亮,很可能能帮你多的3份分左右,所以练字是提高分数的有效手段。
其次是判断作文的话题,给这个话题定性,即它是对我们有好处,还是有害的。研究历年的真题会发现,都可以用“xx很重要/有害处”来作为一篇作文的基本角度,比如:
然后尝试05年-21年这17年将真题的话题进行分类,不同的人有不同的分类依据,此处将上述话题分为四类:个人品质、社会文化、保护环境、电子产品,
类别 | 归类 |
---|---|
个人品质 | 07年自信、08年合作、12年乐观、13年选择、16年榜样的力量、17年实干、18年选择、19年坚持、20年习惯、21年坚持自己的 兴趣 |
社会文化 | 05年和14年孝敬父母、06年偶像崇拜、10年文化融合 |
科技产品 | 19年沉迷网络、15年手机沉迷 |
环境保护 | 11年乱丢垃圾,污染环境 |
我们可以发现,有很多年的话题都具有相似性,比如13年和18年都可以以“选择”为主题,05年和14年都可以以“孝敬父母”为主题,11年和小作文09年(谈一谈对白色污染的看法),所以我们在准备大作文时,一定要注意往年考过的话题,尤其是还没有重复考过的,很可能会成为下一年的作文主题。
接着我们来谈一下作文首段的写作,其实很多模板都只能固定住中间和结尾,我们只需要完成作文手段的创作即可。英语一的大作文全部是漫画作文,所以开头第一句我们可以这样描述:
In the picture(s) above is(are) A and B who are doing sth.
有的是单漫画,有的是双漫画(内容相同或相反),相对来说,双漫画中表达内容相反的话题比较难写,而16年应该首段最难描写的一年,
首先16年是一幅双漫画,其次在这两幅漫画当中又包含相同和相反的内容,左侧漫画中的父亲只要求孩子学习,自己却在玩,属于相反内容;而右侧漫画中父亲以身作则,与孩子一同学习,属于相同,由于包含内容较多,因此在描述起来就有些困难。所以大家可以以16年作文首段作为重点练习的对象,搞定了16年,其他年份就so easy了。
上述中的A和B是漫画中的主体,找一个他们都有的动作作为阐述的动作,用定语从句阐述即可。然后是对主体动作的描述,同一个主题可以拥有多个动作,因此我们要分清主次关系,比如上图左侧父亲的动作,包括看电视、坐(在沙发)以及抽烟三个动作,那么显然“看电视”是主要的动作,抽烟和坐是次要动作。“主要动作用完整的主谓宾,次要动作用非谓语‘’(不知道非谓语的同学请自行去学习语法),所以上述漫画我们可以这样来描述:
In the pictures above are a young father and his son. In the first drawing, asking his son to work hard(努力学习), while the father himself is sitting on the sofa and watching the TV. However, in the second photograph, the father is studying together with his son, both immersed in their books.(第一幅漫画本身就有对比,第二幅漫画是同质,同时这两幅漫画之间又形成了对比。
漫画主题所能发出的动作是有限的,主要包括以下动作:
站:stand
趟:lie
坐:sit
蜷缩:curl
想:think//consider
看:see//watch//stare at//gaze at
说:speak、whisper、say、chat
最后我们在描述完主题的动作之后,可以再加上一句评论性的话(评价一下这幅画说的是好事还是坏事),当然如果字数够多,则不用加评价,如果担心字数不够可以加(主要就是为了凑字数)。记住一下两个句子:
1)This is a thought-provoking scene that can give us plenty of inspiring about our study and life.(正面评价)
2)This is terrible and worrying scene that is not uncommon in today’s society。(负面评价)
其中从05年--20年的首段描写我之前写过,有需要的同学可打开如下链接:
英语一大作文模板示范
最后才是我们的模板部分,主要包括4篇模板,字数较多,可以根据自己的实际情况,如果想要删减,可选择第2段的第3句和5句删掉,其余部分不可删。
个人品质(18年为例)
Practically, what the cartoon intends to convey is that courage ,as one of the most important abilities that we pursue, can make a huge difference to our lives. First and-foremost ,making bold explorations, which presents us with more faith when facing arduous challenges and high-demanding tasks, plays a significant role in delivering solid performances across the board. Namely, being courageous is a prerequisite to enhance our competitiveness because none of outstanding achievements would be made if we haven't perceived the preciousness of this virtue. Additionally, courage is an action word that leads us to unleash our best potential, so as to discover new oceans by losing sight of the shore. In other words, only when we strengthen our capabilities with the aid of this trait, will the possibility to meet triumph expand in proportion to our courage.
In short,courage is at the very essence of doing extraordinary things in each day of our lives. So whatever plans we envision for the future, we should-employ this quality as a springboard to the final success. (175-words)
社会文化(05年)
Practically,what the cartoon intends to convey is that filial piety, as one of the most important central themes that the society puts emphasis on; deserves to- be advocated- vigorously. First and foremost, reciprocating our parents. which acts as the very foundation of a sound personality; offers a strong" impetus for us to cultivate the sense of responsibility. Namely, being filial is a prerequisite to engage in dependable conduct and none of outstanding achievements would be made if we haven't perceived the preciousness of this virtue. Additionally, caring for the old is a dynamic process that leads the entire society-to sustain harmonious and civilized, so as to better demonstrate the vitality of this enduring virtue. In other words; only when every individual practices filial piety with concrete actions, will it become a positive factor in promoting the overall social climate.
In short, there is no exaggeration to say that the trait of providing for the parents motivates people to do extraordinary things in their plain life. So whatever situations we envision for the future we should employ this quality as a springboard to the final success. (189-words)
科技产品类(正面09年)
Practically,what the cartoon intends to convey is that internet , though bringing a variety of convenience to our modern life, may create a negative impacts by additive behaviors. First and forest, overusing of the web, which prevents us from socializing with peers face to face when all the communication is conducted online, plays a destructive role in building interpersonal skills. Namely, it is appropriate utilization of the Internet that enhances our social acceptability because none of intimate relationship would be obtained if we have always hooked on screens. Additionally, there is ample evidence that excessive internet using is correlated with many negative impacts, including higher incidence of anxiety and decreasing learning ability. In other words, only when we set appropriate boundaries around screens, will the benefits brought by the internet expand in proportion to our online time.
There is no question that the field of internet addition prevention is still in its infancy, but that should not distract us from taking actions seriously. To begin with the press is supposed to raise the public consciousness concerning this problematic condition so as to better the current state. More importantly, everyone should set a fine line between right engagement and overindulgence to avoid getting hurt by this double-edged sword. (209 words)
科技产品(负面)
Due to the convenience and efficiency brought by AI, what we should be concerned about the most is that AI may exert favorable influences on us. For one thing, the using of AI may have positive effects on face-to-face communication and interpersonal skills owing to the technology of three-dimensional callings. As humans, we thrive off of our daily interactions with coworkers, friends, family members and other real people. For another thing , if spread extensively, the people, especially college students, are much likely to benefit from this invention in many aspects. such as academic work. In other words, the extensive of AI may exert an impressive and lasting impact on both our society and every individual.
With the situation being so noticeable, it is high time that immediate and consistent actions of efficiency were taken to promote AI. To begin with, the press is expected to guide the public to know more about it. More importantly, everyone, especially the young people, is supposed to explore deeply in this field.(165 words)
环境保护
Practically,what the cartoon intends to convey is environmental pollution , bringing a variety of serious problems and negative impacts, should not be neglected anymore. First and forest, it is this precious blue planet existing for billions of years that provides the basic physiological needs for human beings, such as fresh air, clean water and sufficient food. Namely, natural environment is a prerequisite for either existence or development of the earth family because none of living creatures would survive if the environment is severely polluted. Additionally, the way to treat our ecosystem shapes our environmental ethics which exerts a decisive and lasting impacts on the view of values、economy、technology and consumption. In other words, wheather to protect the environment or not will decide the direction of every aspect of our society.
In order to cope with this imperative issue, joint efforts should be made by the government 、 press 、enterprises and other concerning departments to curb the further environmental deterioration. To begin with, the press is supposed to raise the public consciousness concerning this problematic condition,so as to better the current state. More importantly, every individual, especially the visitors, is expected to remould their attitudes towards the environment and assume the responsibility to preserve it. (210 words)
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