不清楚你实际答题情况不能判断英语作文是否偏题、“擦边”程度，特整理英语四级考试作文部分的评分原则，可以根据自己的实际情况进行评估。
　　1.英语四级作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
　　2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而适切的表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
　　3.写作的标准
　　阅卷标准分为5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。
　　2分(14)——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
　　5分(35)——基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。
　　8分(56)——基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
　　11分(78)——切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
　　14分(99）——切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
　　另外，字数不足会酌情扣分：
　　110——119词：扣1分；100——109词：扣2分；90——99词：扣3分；80——89词：扣4分；70——79词：扣5分；60——69词：扣6分；50——59词：扣7分；50字以下， 扣9分。
　　只写一段者：0-4分，只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）。
　　白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的简单单词而无法表达思想的，判为0分。

2021年12月英语四级作文模板：综合篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....
随着社会的不断发展，出现了越来越多的问题，其中之一便是____________。
As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.
然而，对于此类问题，人们持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....
随着社会的发展，人们开始关注............来源：考试大
People are attaching more and more importance to the interview during job hunting
求职的过程中，人们慢慢意识到面试的重要性。
As to whether it is worthwhile ....., there is a long-running controversial debate. It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.
关于是否值得___________的问题，一直以来争论不休。当然，不同的人对此可能持不同的观点。
In the process of modern urban development, we often find ourselves in a dilemma.
在都市的发展中，我们往往会陷入困境。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....
最近，这种现象引起了人们的广泛关注，有人开始担心______________。
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.
人类进入了一个历史的崭新的阶段，经济全球化、都市化的速度不断加快，随之给我们带来了很多问题。
...... plays such an important role that it undeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes a question, is it a blessing or a curse?"
_______显得非常重要而成为当今世界所关注的最大的问题，这是无可厚非的。不过，问题是："我们该如何抉择?"
Now we are entering a new era, full of opportunities and challenges,
现在我们正在进入一个充满机会和挑战的新时代。
高分作文秘诀

一、临场应试技巧

1. 字迹。可以不漂亮，但是必须工整。

2. 字数。150字最佳。四级要求至少写120字，但是只写120字，每段平均只有40字，显得太少。有的同学写200甚至300字，又太繁琐。

3. 段落分布。一般写三段，而不要写成两段或者四段。另外，第一段大概写2～3句(如果每句话所含字数少的话，可以写4句，这个根据具体情况来定，后面段落同理);第二段写5句左右;第三段如果有重点内容则同样写4～5句，如果是总结性段落，写3句即可。

4. 动手写个提纲，把主题句写出即可，理清自己的思路。第一段要写好，尤其是第一句话，一定不能出现语法错误。尽量使用事先准备好的套话，并学会随机应变，针对不同的题目要求来替换。

5. 留出2~3分钟检查。有没有错词或病句;标点符号是否齐全、准确;每一句话是否符合英语的思维习惯，避免语法错误。另外，修改时要注意卷面整洁。

不好意思，我不是那么擅长英文的，所以在网上拉了一篇给你，不好意思尽力了

范文5. Travelling
People who like travelling have their reasons. They maintain that travelling can help them expand their scope of knowledge, especially geographical and historical learning. They go on to point out that touring will provide more chance for them to enjoy food and try on clothes that they otherwise cannot possible have.
（注：geographical and historical 押尾韵，如：押头韵 clear & clean）
Those who dislike travelling have their reasons. They would argue that travelling means a considerable amount of money and energy. For example, traffic and accommodation require money and walking while seeing sights often tires you.
In practice, travelling does more good than harm. If your finance and health permit, you might as well do some travelling from time to time. It will at least enable you to get familiar with people and things that you will probably grow to like and love.
注：1. in practice = I think 2. does more good than harm 好处比坏处多，其他表达方法：be superior to/ inferior to 比如：the advantages are superior to the disadvantages 3. enable 使

范文1. Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). Some people argue that it is absolutely necessary to hold a test of spoken English in China because we have been informed frequently that a Chinese student who has been learning English for over ten years cannot even communicate with a native speaker. Sometimes even those top students who excel in grammar and writing skills find their English inadequate to express their thoughts freely. A test of English will bring the college students an awareness of the importance of oral English, and will thus help them with their communicating skills.
On the other hand, some others still maintain that a good command of reading and writing skills will be enough for the English learners. To some extent their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their opinion derives from the fact that students are already under considerable pressure from their coursework. Another required test will only add to their burden. Moreover, some students may take the shortcut by focusing on several guessed questions according to the fixed format of the test, hoping for a coincidence to bring them good luck.
In my opinion, a test of spoken English will do more good than harm. Since China will continue its policy of opening and reform, the ability to speak English fluently is a must for anyone who wants to surpass others in a highly competitive society. Whether I take the test or not, I shall spare no efforts to practice oral English in the remaining years of my college study.

9） Internet
Owing to the speedy economic development, the number of the people who use Internet has considerably increased. It is universally acknowledged that Internet playa a crucial role in modern society.
Due attention has to be paid to the issue of Internet. With the reform and opening-up in recent decades, people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of Internet. Unfortunately, if we let this situation continue as it is, we do not know where humans will be in the forthcoming future.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, we should cultivate the authorities to make strict laws to control Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that Internet is essential to us. Only in this way can we solve the problem.

大学英语四级写作范文必背经典
2021年6月大学英语四级范文背诵(01)
COLLEGE STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND PHYSICAL EXERCISE
Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life. However, still some college students do not like to attend sports activities, they think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them.
College students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help students build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relief pressure and keep a pleasant move. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their social skills. Nowadays, all colleges and universities have provided many sports facilities for students to do physical exercises, students can chose freely according to their interests and needs.
As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot, and enjoined great pleasure. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college students, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities.
2021年6月大学英语四级范文背诵(02)
Online games
As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self discipline on too much indulge in these games. So that their health and academic performances are affected.
This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train their ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.
Form my point of view, online games are wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once, but if you have enough self control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.
2021年6月大学英语四级范文背诵(03)
Certificates Craze on Campus
In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly, ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.
Why does this craze appear? There are two mainly reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employments pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a large more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job markets. How can one make himself more competitive, more certificates at hands maybe. Second, the diplomas and certificates are still important standard by which many employers measure a person’s ability in order to increase qualification for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
Form my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove one’s ability, being crazy in getting certificates blindly. It is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
2021年6月大学英语四级范文背诵(04)
How to deal with peer pressure?
College students are often obsessed by peer pressure from their classmates or schoolmates. Facing others’ hard work and good performance in academic and other aspects, many students feel great pressure.
Then, how to deal with this kind of peer pressure? The following measures can be taken.
First, you should take a careful look at your present level and set a practical object. You needn’t always compare yourselves with those on the top and just make your efforts towards your object.
Second, under peer pressure, you shouldn’t feel discouraged and pressed. Instead, you should make it your motivation for harder work.
Finally, if you find pressure is nearly beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance.
As a college student, I have no way to avoid peer pressure, so I try to figure out the way to do with it well. I set my own goal, including my practical level and my position among the peers. Because of my focus on my own goal, I have no time and energy to think about the pressure. So I’m little troubled by it.
To conclude, we should not escape from peer pressure, but learn to make best use of it, since it can hardly be avoided.
2021年6月大学英语四级范文背诵(05)
Should college students be tutors?
Nowadays there are more and more provided tutors among college students. Some students even take a few tutor jobs at the same time. People have different opinions about this phenomenon.
Some people believe college students can benefit a lot from being tutors. On the one hand they can earn some money and lessen the burden on their family. On the other hand they can have chances to apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems.
However still others object to college students being a tutor. They think that a student should focus on his study instead of doing a part-time job. If they spend too much time on teaching, they will not have enough time to study, and naturally their academic performance will be affected.
In the two arguments, I’m in favor of the former one. In my opinion, to be a tutor is a good practical activity for us college students, from which we can gain practical experience and skills. But it is worth noting that we cannot spend too much time in being tutors. We should balance the relationship between the tutor job and study.
2021年6月大学英语四级范文背诵(06)
Welcome to the camera club
Welcome to the camera club. With the sponsor of the student’s union, the camera club has been set and served all the students for 15 years. Many wonderful activities are organized and arranged in our club. As is expected by all, the training on how to make the best use of the camera to provide a wonderful picture is open to all new members. Besides we will organize traveling activities at times, during which the participants have the chance to show the pictures, as well as enjoy beautiful scenery. In addition, photo contests will be held is the opportunities to show your progress. We have good reasons to believe that all these activities are quite beneficial to both your study and life, not only can they help you improve your camera technique, but also enrich your college life greatly. Moreover by participating in the traveling activities and photo contests, you can be close to the nature and broaden your views. Anyone who is interested in photography welcome warmly. What you need to do is just to call us at 62514479 or email us at cameraclub@163.com. Looking forward to your participation.

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如果语言优美 又没彻底跑偏的情况下，应该不至于太低，除非遇上特别严肃认真的老师，一般会在11分左右吧，下面有评阅标准 ，可以自己估算下
专业四级的阅卷标准，其要点归纳起来可分为下述五个方面的内容：主题，展开，结论，语法和修辞。其中前三项涉及篇章结构；后两项涉及语言本身。如果我们把作文的15个得分点平均分摊到这5个方面或按照公认的比例分摊到这5个方面，可以大体估算自己可以得的分数，具体标准可以参考一下，根据阅卷的经验，速度和效率的要求使得评阅时间有限，第5级者得15分，其特征是：“准确高效的交流”，具体表现为“文章富有成效地满足了写作要求。结构展开充分，逻辑严紧，主题明确，论证充分详实。无单词，拼写，标点或句法方面的错误。作文表明作者具有相当的准确地使用语言的能力。全文阅读无障碍。
第4级者得14—12分，其特征是：“近乎无误的良好交流”，具体表现为“尽管各部分之间有所起伏，但文章正确地满足了几乎所有的写作要求。一般地讲，有主题，有论证，结构展开充分，逻辑严紧。相对来讲，很少单词，拼写，标点或句法方面的错误。作文表明作者具有准确地使用语言的能力。全文阅读很少障碍。
第3级者得11—9分，其特征是：“交流尚可，稍有错误”，具体表现为“文章正确地满足了大部分的写作要求。尽管在流畅，清晰，一致和支撑方面偶有欠缺，总体而言，结构展开充分。尽管文章在单词，拼写，标点或句法方面偶有错误，并时而导致语意模糊，但作文在一定程度上表明作者具有比较准确地使用语言的能力。全文阅读偶有障碍。”第2级者得8—6分，其特征是：“错误频出，交流有碍”，具体表现为“文章只是满足了部分写作要求。文章结构差，在流畅，清晰，一致和支撑诸方面时有缺欠。在单词，拼写，标点或句法方面错误百出。表明作者准确地使用语言的能力有限。全文阅读有一定的障碍。
第1级者得5—3分，其特征是：“几乎无交流”，具体表现为“根本没有满足写作要求。既无结构，又无内在逻辑。几乎所有的句子都存在单词，拼写，标点或句法方面的错误。缺乏准确地使用语言的能力。即使相当努力地阅读，大部分行文仍然难以理解。

没关系的，这种考试走走过程

一般来说，没太偏就会给个及格分以上