虽然WORD是一个办法,但考试时能用word吗?建议你多做改错题,能找出别人的错误也当然可以发现自己的不足.不要一个词一个词地检查,要整句地观察,分析句子结构,从而找出错误.最基本的是巩固语法知识,多用,熟悉了下意识也会写对.

[who turning left]是定语从句，不应该用非谓语动词ing形式，这里是谓语，应该是who turned left.

至于[reached to]语法上来说没的问题。你这个句子简化下的话，就是
The accidents reached to 608，就是这个搭配啊，应该是the number of the accidents reached to 608 才对。

第二句嘛，So the more cars on the road the more accidents may happen其实也说的过去，中间加个逗号。So the more cars on the road，the more accidents may happen

3)they usually[ driving] after drinking

这句还是那个问题，不应该用ing形式，应该是they usually drive afer drinking.

4)they are [too confident to ]believe that they will not meet accidents.
这句话，too 。。to是太，，，而不能。用错了。改为
they are so confident that they don't believe they will meet accidents.

5)[5)[government should punish who fail to obey the laws]]

punish缺少宾语，定语从句前也没有先行词，要加those people
government should punish those people who fail to obey the laws

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1)[who turning left] 从句谓语形势不对 改who turn left

[reached to]去to

2)[ So the more cars on the road the more accidents may happen.] So the more cars加are

根据上文，把may改will，因为may、的可能性较小，will 较强
语法上没什么大毛病
3)they usually[ driving] after drinking

改成drive ，句子里谓语是原形，第三人称或过去式，
要用driving 要改成they are always driving，因为用doing形式不能直接放到主语后面，要加is，are等be 动词
4）they are [too confident to ]believe that they will not meet accidents.

too to 句型，太而不能，用这个短语就是他们太自信了以至于不相信他们不会出车祸
这样意思就变了 改成
they are [too confident to ]consider that they will meet accidents.

或是they are very confident and believe that they will not meet accidents.

5)[government should punish who fail to obey the laws

缺宾语 punish who 中间加those
who fail to obey the laws是个定语从句，修饰宾语，把它去掉，就没有宾语了

政府要惩罚的，是不遵守法律的人

祝你考试顺利(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……

写英语作文自己如何知道语法有没有错？
What does 4x(YJZ_185) x 2xMpp mean?

This symbol represents several cables

This essay is crap. Anyway, I correct it to look better.
The progress of science has made great changes to people's lives. Almost everyone has his own private car. In the street, everywhere is a busy scene. There are a lot of people and vehicles. However, people never stop to interact. Nowaday, we seldom home-cook, we often eat in a restaurant. In the evening, the home is very quiet, very few family will have the whole family members together. The street, brightly lit, is forever fill with noise. Whatever things you need, you can go to the store to buy. As such, family meeting becomes less. People just call, chat on the Internet. Everyone's mind is only thinking of money. The former happy life has disappeared. Everyone needs to slow down and enjoy life.

Now, with the progress of science, great changes have taken place in people's life. Almost everyone has his own private cars. In the street, everywhere is busy . There are a lot of people and vehicles. But people never stop. We seldom home cooking,because we often eat in restaurants. In the evening, the home is very quiet, few people can rest with the whole family . The street, brightly lit, never stop making so much noise. Whatever it takes things can go to the store to buy. And family meetings become less, just call, chat on the Internet. Everyone's heart is full of money. The former happy life disappeared. Everyone needs to change and enjoy life.

这是我亲自改过的 望采纳 ！

"In the street"改为“on the street”
“We seldom home cooking”一句中没有动词，改为“we seldom cook at hom”

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