我们老师说，考四级作文就要用她给的模板，这样作文就可以不拿低分，到底是不是这样形式化就好？好人，把模板发给我吧~~~~~~~3...
我们老师说，考四级作文就要用她给的模板，这样作文就可以不拿低分，到底是不是这样形式化就好？
好人 把模板发给我吧~~~~~~~345950492@qq.com 谢谢 好人 么么~~
请英语高手们帮我点评一下我的这篇英语四级作文（语法、用词或者其他）万分感谢
1：一次性塑料袋曾被广泛使用rn2：使用一次性塑料袋带来的问题rn3：限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义rnLimiting the Use of Disposable Plastic Bagsrn In the past years ,the disposable plastic bags was used to person extensively,especially people who buying in supermarket.There are many problems with disposable plastic bags was thrown away everywhere ,and it will cause the White Pollution .And secondly ,plastic bags are not easy to decompose ,so it will leave in our land a long time and pollute our groundwater.Lastly ,some people always choose to burn the disposable plastic bags when it is many .rn As the plastic bags takes more and more problems,our government make a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags.For my part,I think the action can take many benefits to person .To begin with ,it will reduce the product of disposable plastic bags and as the price increased,people will control their desire of use it.In addition ,it can protect our environment better and ensure our health.In a word,it is a beneficial thing that it can make our life better.供参考
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In the past years ,the disposable plastic bags were (was) used by people (to person) extensively, especially those (people) who buy(ing) things in
supermarket.There are many problems with disposable plastic bags being (was)
thrown away everywhere ,(and it will cause) thus causing the White Pollution
.And secondly ,plastic bags are not easy to decompose ,so they (it) will remain (leave) in our land a long time and pollute our groundwater.Lastly
,some people always choose to burn the disposable plastic bags when they have too (it is) many (1).
As the plastic bags created (takes) more and more problems,our government
made(make) a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags(2).As far as
I am concerned (For my part), I think the action can bring (take) many benefits
to people (person) .To begin with ,it will reduce the production (product)
of disposable plastic bags and as the price increases (increased),people
will control their desire of using them (use it).In addition ,it can protect
better both our environment (better) and (ensure) our health.In short (a word),it is a beneficial thing that it can make our life better.
(1)或when there are too many.
(2)时态不清楚,政府通过法例了吗?还是计划这样做?
如果还未能
As the plastic bags have created more and more problems,our government
will pass a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags.
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In the past years ,the disposable plastic bags were (was) used by people (to person) extensively, especially those (people) who buy(ing) things in
supermarket.There are many problems with disposable plastic bags being (was)
thrown away everywhere ,(and it will cause) thus causing the White Pollution
.And secondly ,plastic bags are not easy to decompose ,so they (it) will remain (leave) in our land a long time and pollute our groundwater.Lastly
,some people always choose to burn the disposable plastic bags when they have too (it is) many (1).
As the plastic bags created (takes) more and more problems,our government
made(make) a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags(2).As far as
I am concerned (For my part), I think the action can bring (take) many benefits
to people (person) .To begin with ,it will reduce the production (product)
of disposable plastic bags and as the price increases (increased),people
will control their desire of using them (use it).In addition ,it can protect
better both our environment (better) and (ensure) our health.In short (a word),it is a beneficial thing that it can make our life better.
(1)或when there are too many.
(2)时态不清楚,政府通过法例了吗?还是计划这样做?
如果还未能
As the plastic bags have created more and more problems,our government
will pass a law to limit the use of disposable plastic bags.
plastic bags was thrown away everywhere ,and it will cause the White Pollution 前面是过去时，后面也应该主从一致使用过去式。
And secondly 这个and应该去掉。因为secondly已经起到了连词的作用
it will leave in our land a long time ==== it will be left in the earth for a long time
when it is many ====when there are too many bags
our government make a law ==== our government makes the law
take many benefits 用 make 好一点
.In a word 一般这个后面真的就是一个词，所以改成To sum up
And secondly 这个and应该去掉。因为secondly已经起到了连词的作用
it will leave in our land a long time ==== it will be left in the earth for a long time
when it is many ====when there are too many bags
our government make a law ==== our government makes the law
take many benefits 用 make 好一点
.In a word 一般这个后面真的就是一个词，所以改成To sum up
was used 应改为has been used to .buying应改为buy。本篇出现较多的语法错误，主要是定语从句时态以及一些固定用法出错如make many benifits
段落可以分三到四段，还有尽量用例如，first,second,等序列话，或者用能让阅卷老师很快很清楚看出你的观点的方式。可以背些通俗的谚语，在问前或文末来上一句，会给你的作文添上一个亮点！！！这是我的个人观点哈！！！！一起努力！！！
一些四级英语问题 首先声明，我是大一新生....英语还是高中水平....暑假在家做四级，发现好多句子不明白..
1。08年12作文 范文 to invoke the public awareness on environmental protection和enhance people`s awareness on environmental protection.....是of和on都可以换用，还是由动词决定？我记得高中老师讲的是of....awareness of sth.....rn2.08年12听力13题原文 Have you inquired at the apartment complex down the street？ complex不解....难道是打印错误？（P.S：我买的那本四级很多打印错误==）rn3.07年12 长阅读 In the wake of September11，changes in the visa process caused a dramatic decline....In the wake of....不解....（难道又是打印错误？）rn4.06年6月 65题 By saying “.....we are going to look the other way in terms of what our laws are ”Mayor Alderson means——rnB.we will examine the law in a difference wayrnC.there are other ways of enforcing the lawrnFirse,不明白原句的意思Second，我怎么觉得B项更接近原句啊....==rnrnrn接下来是新概念的一些问题....rnLesson21rnMendoza met Humphries in the ring on a later occasion ....... In the ring?是什么意思？译文里也没有翻译出来啊....rn还有 22课里面 go on repeating the same lines night after night.....这里的go on 是表示什么呢?动作的连续性？感觉去掉go on 也没有影响啊....rnrn然后是我看的一部小说 The house on Mango street 里的一些句子....rn1.My great-grand mother .I would·ve liked to have known her,a wild horse of a woman,so wild she wouldn`t marry.rnwould·ve liked to have known......这是神马时态啊....貌似是虚拟语气加完成时那后面那个have又是神马？a wild horse of a woman又是神马.....rn翻译为：我的 曾祖母，要是我见过她多好，女人中的野马，野得不想嫁人。rn2.Cathy Queen of Cats里面的rnAlicia is stuck-up ever since she went to college. stuck-up翻译为 傲气.....rn还有一句....Cats asleep like little dounts.睡姿像面包圈的猫。asleep可以当动词？rn这些估计跟上下文有关系，请看过这本书的高人回答一下吧....不胜感激.....1。08年12作文 范文 to invoke the public awareness on environmental protection和enhance people`s awareness on environmental protection.....是of和on都可以换用
2.08年12听力13题原文 Have you inquired at the apartment complex down the street？ the apartment complex公寓楼盘的意思
3.07年12 长阅读 In the wake of September11，changes in the visa process caused a dramatic decline....In the wake of....在...之后
接下来是新概念的一些问题....
Lesson21
Mendoza met Humphries in the ring on a later occasion ....... In the ring是回合比赛的意思
还有 22课里面 go on repeating the same lines night after night.....这里的go on 是表示继续...
1.My great-grand mother .I would·ve liked to have known her,a wild horse of a woman,so wild she wouldn`t marry.
would·ve liked to have known......这是would have done过去将来完成时态啊 表示过去本来想完整了解她.
a wild horse of a woman表示这女人桀骜不驯
2.Cathy Queen of Cats里面的
Alicia is stuck-up ever since she went to college.
stuck-up翻译为 傲慢
asleep在语法里不能当动词 小说语言有时不那么严谨啦 不用死抠
2.08年12听力13题原文 Have you inquired at the apartment complex down the street？ the apartment complex公寓楼盘的意思
3.07年12 长阅读 In the wake of September11，changes in the visa process caused a dramatic decline....In the wake of....在...之后
接下来是新概念的一些问题....
Lesson21
Mendoza met Humphries in the ring on a later occasion ....... In the ring是回合比赛的意思
还有 22课里面 go on repeating the same lines night after night.....这里的go on 是表示继续...
1.My great-grand mother .I would·ve liked to have known her,a wild horse of a woman,so wild she wouldn`t marry.
would·ve liked to have known......这是would have done过去将来完成时态啊 表示过去本来想完整了解她.
a wild horse of a woman表示这女人桀骜不驯
2.Cathy Queen of Cats里面的
Alicia is stuck-up ever since she went to college.
stuck-up翻译为 傲慢
asleep在语法里不能当动词 小说语言有时不那么严谨啦 不用死抠
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2021年12月四级作文问题
作文让写大学期间印象最深的课程，我写的是困难的课程是我大学期间印象最深的课程，这算跑题么您好！
以我之见， 我认为您的作文应该是有跑题的嫌疑。
首先今年四级的这篇作文，非常的接地气。直接从我们大学生活出发。
再揣摩一下出题者的意图，是要让考生有话可说。总管近几年考试题目，毕竟四级考试的作文题在审题上并没有过多的为难考生，所以对于今年12月的四级作文，应该就是从它的表面意义出发。
最深刻的课程，考生可以选择自己最喜欢 的，也可以是感触颇丰的课程。
而您写的【困难的课程】不免有点泛泛之意。
但若是文章内容牵涉到了具体哪一门课程的话，那就自然好，还可以算作切合题意。如果只写困难的课程给您学习上一点阻力，涵盖的是所有这类课程的话，那还是挺危险的。
总之，四级考试已经过去。希望您能拿到自己满意的结果！
希望我的答案可以帮助到您 ！
如有疑问，不要怕麻烦请追问哦~
如果满意，不要忘记采纳哟~
您的采纳是我回答最大 的动力哦
以我之见， 我认为您的作文应该是有跑题的嫌疑。
首先今年四级的这篇作文，非常的接地气。直接从我们大学生活出发。
再揣摩一下出题者的意图，是要让考生有话可说。总管近几年考试题目，毕竟四级考试的作文题在审题上并没有过多的为难考生，所以对于今年12月的四级作文，应该就是从它的表面意义出发。
最深刻的课程，考生可以选择自己最喜欢 的，也可以是感触颇丰的课程。
而您写的【困难的课程】不免有点泛泛之意。
但若是文章内容牵涉到了具体哪一门课程的话，那就自然好，还可以算作切合题意。如果只写困难的课程给您学习上一点阻力，涵盖的是所有这类课程的话，那还是挺危险的。
总之，四级考试已经过去。希望您能拿到自己满意的结果！
希望我的答案可以帮助到您 ！
如有疑问，不要怕麻烦请追问哦~
如果满意，不要忘记采纳哟~
您的采纳是我回答最大 的动力哦
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