In this summer holidays, I read a book called < Great Expectations>, it was written by Charles Dickens, one of the most famous English writers. He wrote lots of wonderful novels. This book is one of his compositions.
People always like to compare with their friends. It is a big foible of all the people. If other people have a lot of money, we also want to be rich. If all the people around us are poor , we never mind that we are very poor, too. we will not ashamed because of our folly. This is a social problem.
If we never possess anything, we will not mind we lost some thing. Since we don’t want to be very rich ,we will not feel despond because poor.
The protagonist of this novel is Pip (Handel). His parents died when he was a baby. His sister had brought him up ‘by hand’. His sister married to Joe Gargery, the village blacksmith. They didn’t have much money, and Pip never went to school to study. But he was often very happy .Because all of his friends are like him. It isn’t very unfortunate to them, this is their lives. But by a chance, Pip helped a convict; he gave much food to him. Then he met Miss Havisham, a very strange old woman and she was very rich.
Four years later, Miss Havisham wants Pip to be removed from his home and educated as a gentleman who expects inherit a fortune when he grow up.
After hearing that . Pip started to despise his poor friends. He even feel ashamed because he live with the poor man . Pip’s ‘great expectations’ destroyed his life.
This novel told us that we cannot compare with others .Don’t feel envy at the others money. And if one day you be very rich , please don’t despise your poor friends. To hear is to obey
--The informal book review after reading ALADDIN AND THE ENCHANTED LAMP
ALADDIN AND THE ENCHANTED LAMP is a famous fairy tail written by an English author named Judith Deam. It tells a story about how a good-for-nothing becomes to a rich man with his beloved princess by an enchanted lamp.
Though there are some traces of reality in the story, such as “The daughters of a Sultan do not marry poor boys from the city” and “Mother, you must speak to the Sultan. I have no father to do this for me. You must help me--I must marry the Princess”(both the two sentences are spoken by Aladdin)--from the former one, we could find the marrage in Arabia connected to the family status as the same that in ancient China, so does the latter one, which suggests that marrage is not as free as that in the modern times but should be allowed by the parents of the young people, after all, it is a fairy tail, isn’t it? How can a good-for-nothing become a good-for-eveything without hard efforts in the real society full of furious competitions? And carrying out dreams seems not so easy as just rubbing the enchanted lamp, saying your hopes to the jinnee and waiting. Well, it is the fairy tail that makes something impossible in reality come true in the story.
That what takes root in my mind is not the magic, but the saying: to hear is to obey, which is said by the jinnee. It would be so wonderful if I had a enchanted ring or lamp that I could do every thing I want, because that “ to hear is to obey”. I wanna fly to my lover far far away, I wanna cure my mother’s bad cold, and I wanna stop wars in the world from now on. There are many colourful dreams in my mind, if I had a enchanted lamp, all of which could come true easily. But do I really have one? No. But does it mean all my dreams would die off without the enchanted lamp? No. Beacause I believe, my heart is an enchanted lamp, as long as I rub it with the strong determinations which would never be given up, I will find the courge as the jinnee to help me make the dreams come true. To hear is to catch the sound of desire sleeping in the bottom of the heart; to obey is to carry out the desire no matter how hard it would be. If I did not hear my aspiration, who would hear? If I did not obey myself, what would obey me?
We are the enchanted lamp, the jinnee, the director of our own life. So my dear friends, are you ready to hear and to obey? In this summer holidays, I read a book called < Great Expectations>, it was written by Charles Dickens, one of the most famous English writers. He wrote lots of wonderful novels. This book is one of his compositions. People always like to compare with their friends. It is a big foible of all the people. If other people have a lot of money, we also want to be rich. If all the people around us are poor , we never mind that we are very poor, too. we will not ashamed because of our folly. This is a social problem. If we never possess anything, we will not mind we lost some thing. Since we don’t want to be very rich ,we will not feel despond because poor. The protagonist of this novel is Pip (Handel). His parents died when he was a baby. His sister had brought him up ‘by hand’. His sister married to Joe Gargery, the village blacksmith. They didn’t have much money, and Pip never went to school to study. But he was often very happy .Because all of his friends are like him. It isn’t very unfortunate to them, this is their lives. But by a chance, Pip helped a convict; he gave much food to him. Then he met Miss Havisham, a very strange old woman and she was very rich. Four years later, Miss Havisham wants Pip to be removed from his home and educated as a gentleman who expects inherit a fortune when he grow up. After hearing that . Pip started to despise his poor friends. He even feel ashamed because he live with the poor man . Pip’s ‘great expectations’ destroyed his life. This novel told us that we cannot compare with others .Don’t feel envy at the others money. And if one day you be very rich , please don’t despise your poor friends.

Hamlet（哈姆雷特）
Shakspere (wrong spelling) created Hamlet--a man with wisdom and courage .In order to revenge on his uncle for killing his father, he pretented (spelling mistake) to be mad and suffered a series of misery. On the contrary, we can also say that Hamlet is rude and selfish for he did not think twice before his revenge . if (Capitalize "If" since it is the beginning word of the sentence.) a country has no king, how can a country keep alive (You need a question mark here since it is a question.) So, every thing has two sides, the bright side and adumbral side. Every time we make a decision we have to think twice.
Comment:
Be careful with your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Too many uncessary mistakes.
It is good that you looked at both the dark and bright sides of Hamlet. Thats quite objective and convincing.

《朝花夕拾》
I read the book written by Luxun .It is called zhaohuaxishi.It includes ten articles about the anthor's stories . when I read this book ,I feel very happy to see luxun's childhood.It was diffrent from ours,so we maybe find it intersting and exciting. luxun's langange is very graceful, but maybe it is difficult to understand Through his words ,we can find his happiness in his heart .
《朝花夕拾》
我读过鲁迅写的书。它叫做朝花夕拾。它包括关于作者的故事十篇。当我读这本书，我觉得看鲁迅的童年很幸福。这是不同于我们，所以我们会发现它有趣和令人兴奋的。鲁迅的语言非常优美，但也许很难通过他的话来理解，我们可以发现他心中的快乐。